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I FAKE ‘DEATH’ TO TEST MY SHY MAID’S LOYALTY, BUT WHAT I DISCOVERED… WENT DEEPER THAN I COULD EVER HANDLE.

I am Lorenzo Vergara, 41. CEO. Successful. Everyone admires me— except one person: Mara, my shyest and most devoted maid. She’s quiet. Polite. She doesn’t speak unless necessary. In the two years I’ve had her, not once has she looked me in the eye.

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But there’s something about her— a kindness that confuses me. Because I’ve been hurt so many times by “nice” people, I started wondering: Is she truly loyal? Or is this all just an act? That’s when my plan— a plan I should never have conceived— began.

THE DECEPTION I THOUGHT WOULD BE SIMPLE

I spent a week planning: Pretend I had a heart attack. Pretend I collapsed. Pretend I wasn’t breathing. I wanted to see her real reaction. Would she care for me? Or run away, like everyone else? Grief? Fear? A call for help? Or… indifference?

One afternoon, I did it. I lay on the living room floor— motionless, silent. And I waited for Mara to come in.

THE REACTION I DIDN’T EXPECT

When she opened the door, she did what she always did— took off her slippers and began quietly sweeping. But when she saw me on the floor… The broom dropped. She rushed over. She knelt beside me. And before I could react, her tears hit my cheek.

I couldn’t take it. Her tears were real. The fear was real. Her trembling voice was real.

Mara: “Sir… please, not now… please don’t leave me… please…”

She sniffled, like a frightened child. She didn’t call me “Sir Vergara” like usual— but just “Sir,” full of tenderness, pain, and desperation. And maybe… I should’ve told the truth right then. But I didn’t. I still wanted to know what she would do next.

THE TRUTH THAT WOKE ME UP

She called an ambulance— hands shaking. She paced around the house, unsure where to find the strength to act. She held my hand. And she spoke softly.

Mara: “If you only knew… how kind you’ve been to me, even if I never say it. If you only knew how much I… cherish you.”

And there— my heart beat loudly. Not because of pain… but because of her. I couldn’t hold it in any longer. I didn’t want to see her fall apart because of my lie. So, I slowly opened my eyes.

THE SHOCK THAT SILENCED HER

Me: “M-Mara…?”

Mara (stepping back): “S-Sir? You’re alive?! You’re alive!!!”

She fled— mortified, trembling, her face flushed like she might faint.

Me: “Mara! Wait!”

I caught up to her in the kitchen. She was leaning against the fridge, gasping for air.

Me: “I’m sorry… I shouldn’t have done that.”

Mara: “Sir… why did you trick me?”

Me: “I wanted to know if… you were real.”

Mara: “I am real. I’m just a human too, Sir. I get hurt. I get scared. And yes… I have feelings.”

I looked at her, stunned.

Me: “What… feelings?”

Mara (closing her eyes, looking away): “That… I don’t want to lose you.”

And then, everything seemed to stop. Me, the man who never let a woman make him cry— now standing in front of the woman I couldn’t even look at for months because I was afraid of what I felt.

THE TRUTH THAT HELD MY HEART BACK

I moved closer, softly. Carefully.

Me: “Mara… if you only knew… you’re the first person who has shown me kindness without expecting anything in return.”

She looked at me— and I saw the secret she’d hidden for two years: Love. Care. Hiding, afraid of being hurt.

Me: “I didn’t want to hurt you. But you woke me up. And you made the beat of my heart, which had long been dead, come back to life.”

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She took a deep breath. Tears fell.

Mara: “Sir… don’t say that if you don’t mean it.”

Me: “It’s true. And from now on… I don’t want you to call me ‘Sir’ anymore.”

She shook her head, smiling.

Mara: “Then what should I call you?”

I leaned in, holding her cold hand.

Me: “Lorenzo.”

And there… she laughed for the first time. And in that moment… I surrendered.

EPILOGUE — THE BEGINNING OF A LIE THAT BROUGHT THE TRUTH

Now, we’ve been together for a year. She’s no longer my maid. She’s my companion for every dinner, every conversation, every new beginning. And sometimes, she asks me:

Mara: “If you hadn’t tested me back then… would you have known the truth?”

Me: “No. And thank God… I tested you— because that’s how I found the woman who would fix my life.”

And me? I don’t pretend to be dead anymore. Because of her— I am truly alive again.

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